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I hope that you will consider me for your position.May I have a personal interview at your convenience?I can be reached by telephone between 3p.m.and 10p.m..

Sincerely yours,

Wang Lin

妙语评析:这是一封求职申请信。首先直接点出了主题即申请法律秘书职务。接着介绍了自己的教育经历和专业能力,还有一些其他的工作经验,并提出对这份工作的期望。最后是希望可以面谈。这是一篇非常成功的求职信,表意明确,条理清晰,语言流畅,连贯性较强。文中用黑体标出的句子是求职信中常用的经典句式。

句型模板

1.I am applying for the position of_________advertised in_________.

2.My complete resume is attached.

3.I believe my training and experience_________.

4.I hope that you will consider me for your position.

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Dear_________,

I am applying for the position of_________advertised in_________.I major in_________.My training in_________definitely meet your qualifications.My complete resume is attached.

I will graduate on_________.In addition to the required courses of this program,I have_________.I also have some experiences in_________.I believe my training and experience_________.You will find me to be_________.

I hope that you will consider me for your position.May I have a personal interview at your convenience?I can be reached by telephone between_________and_________.

Sincerely yours,

Signature

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write An Appeal(呼吁书).You should write at Ieast 120words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.一个同学需要帮助,方法是募捐。

2.募捐的程序。

3.号召同学参加。

范文欣赏

Appeal

In the course of fighting against illness,we humans have won one victory after another.However,we are still faced with certain diseases left unconquered.Leukemia is one of them.Liu Shuang,a student of Dept of Iaw,is bearing this burden and she needs our support.

Since Iast May,she has been in hospital receiving all kinds of medical treatments and concerns from her family,friends and schoolmates.As you know,medical cost is so much that it is already far beyond the reach of her family with her father,the only breadwinner.So she needs our donations.The procedure goes Iike this:from Monday through Friday,the Student Association will display a donation box at the students’canteen at each meal hour.

Your small financial support can be a great help for a person in need.It will enable Liu Shuang to continue her treatment.And what is more important and remarkable is that by so doing we can forge a great alliance of love to force back the devil of the illness.

妙语评析:这是一篇呼吁书。范文值得大家学习的好文章。文中用黑体标出的句子非常精彩,是此文章的亮点。

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1.However,we are still faced with_________.

2.As you know,_________.

3.The procedure goes Iike this:_________.

4.And what is more important and remarkable is that by so doing we can_________.

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Appeal

In the course of fighting against_________,we humans have won one victory after another.However,we are still faced with_________._________is one of them._________,a student of_________,is bearing this burden and she needs our support.

Since_________,she has been_________.As you know,_________.So she needs our_________.The procedure goes Iike this:_________.

Your small financial support can be a great help for a person in need.It will en-able_________to_________.And what is more important and remarkable is that by so doing we can_________.

Directions:Suppose you are Wang Min.You have just graduated from a university and the headmaster of your previous high school has invited you to give a speech to the students.Unfortunately,you have something urgent to do on that day.Write a Ietter of about.

1.由于不能按计划做演讲向校方道歉。

2.解释推迟计划的原因。

3.建议下次做演讲,并约定下次演讲的时间。

范文欣赏

An Apology Letter to the Previous Headmaster

January 24th,2007

Dear Mr.Zhang,

I am excessively sorry to tell you that I couldn‘t make the speech on how to study English language in China as planned.Now,I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret.Please accept my sincere apology with gratitude.I fear you are displeased at my being unable to making a speech.I hope you will understand me and excuse me for being absent.

Let me explain.The reason for my absence was that I had already arranged to do something else.I had no way out because the things I needed to do were very urgent.Therefore,it’s not in my power to comply with your request.

Naturally,I want to suggest that I give another speech at the end of this term.I shall be obliged if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you will arrange the Iecture for students.We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Wang Min

妙语评析:这是一封道歉信。依据提纲要求,不错的模板作文。文中用黑体标出的句子是道歉信写作中比较经典句型,适于背诵。

句型模板

1.I am excessively sorry to tell you that_________.

2.I hope you will understand me and excuse me for_________.

3.The reason for my absence was that_________.

4.Therefore,it‘s not in my power to_________.

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Dear_________,

I am excessively sorry to tell you that_________.Now,I am writing you this Ietter of apology to show my deep regret.PIease accept my sincere apology with gratitude.I fear you are displeased at_________.I hope you will understand me and excuse me for.

Let me explain.The reason for my absence was that_________.I had no way out because_________.Therefore,it’s not in my power to_________.

Naturally,I want to suggest_________.I shall be obliged if you will kindly write and tell me when and where you_________.We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Signature

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write A Letter of Recommendation.You should write at Ieast 120words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

假如你是一位老师,请为你的学生写一封推荐信。该学生想进入某学校做一位老师,在信中:

1.详细叙述该学生的能力。

2.表达对其潜力的赞赏。

3.坚信其能在工作岗位上取得成功。

范文欣赏

A Letter of Recommendation

To Mr.Smith,

It is with great pleasure that I write to recommend Lily to you.I have known Lily for the past three years and have had the pleasure of having her in my class during her senior year.During the time I have found her to be a bright and diligent young Iady.