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第25章 模板作文赏析(9)

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Sometimes we have_________.Why?One situation may be that_________.The other situation may be that_________.On both occasions we should_________.

But the case is not always the same in our daily Iife.Some people_________.On the one hand,_________.On the other hand_________.

_________will eventually do you some harm.If you_________,they may think_________.If you_________,you will_________.So,_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic Do“Lucky Numbers”Really Bring Good Luck?You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运;

2.我认为数字和运气无关……

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Dose“Lucky Numbers”Really bring Good Luck?

Nowadays more and more people pay more attention on us a lucky number to bless them.Some people argue that some lucky numbers can bring them good luck.For instance,the so-called Iucky number“8”is widely used now because it is sounded Iike“getting rich”in Chinese while others firmly hold that Iucky number is only people’s psychological influence and they regard numbers simply as a mathematic symbol for counting.

In my opinion,I think this question should be probed in depth.The so-called Iucky number,which are anything but a mystery,and I‘m in favor of the Iatter opinion.I think our society is very modern now.We mustn’t count on the so-called Iucky numbers to fulfill our wishes.

In a word,we can see clearly that whether we can have good luck depends on ourselves.If we work hard,good Iuck will come to us.

(1998.6CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇个人观点议论文。文章结构比较清晰,即首段提出一种看法,强调一部分的观点和另一部分人的观点。然后在第二段中阐述自己的观点,并说明理由。第三段总结全文,指出了正确的观点,即每个人都要用自己的努力去争取运气,而不是靠所谓的幸运数字。文中用黑体标出的句子是议论文常用句型,适合作为经典模板句式。

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1.Nowadays more and more people pay more attention on_________.

2.Some people argue that_________.

3.In my opinion,I think this question should be probed in depth.

4.In a word,we can see clearly that_________.

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Nowadays more and more people pay more attention on_________.Some people argue that_________.For instance,_________while others firmly hold that_________.

In my opinion,I think this question should be probed in depth._________,which are anything but a mystery,_________.I think_________.We mustn‘t count on_________.

In a word,we can see clearly that_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition about The Two day Weekend in three paragraphs.You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:?1.双休日给大学生带来的好处是什么?

2.双休日可能给大学生带来的问题是什么?

3.我该怎样过好双休日。

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The Two-day Weekend

The two-day weekend has become regular rest day for college students and good for them.During the weekend,they’re able to go out and relax themselves,such as go hiking,camping,visiting museums,or shopping.They could have a good rest and be prepared for the next busy week.They also do some part-time jobs to enlarge their job experience and benefit from it in the future.

However,the two-day weekend has also come up many problems.Many students feel bored in the Iong weekend,and they always choose to computer games for entertainment.They play computer games for a whole or two days.Therefore,it is so harmful to their health and even the studies.Some of them become addicted to the computer games and even play games in the class.

In my mind,in order to benefit most from the two-day weekend,we should make a good plan for it.And we make our Iives healthier and happier.

(1996.1CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇利弊议论文。根据提纲的要求分为了三部分。文章的骨干句。

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1.For instance,it not only_________,but also_________.

2.From these activities we can Iearn_________.

3.However,_________has also given rise to quite a few problems.

4.The most serious one is that_________.

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_________and it has brought a Iot of benefits to college students.For instance,it not only_________,but also_________.From these activities we can Iearn_________.

However,_________has also given rise to quite a few problems.The most serious one is that_________.In my mind,_________.Some of them_________.We should pay more attention to.

In order to benefit most from_________,I have decided to_________.Of course I should_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic Can Money Buy Happiness?You should write no Iess than 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:_________

1.有人认为金钱是幸福之本(source of happiness)。

2.也有人认为金钱是万恶之源(root of all evil)。

3.我的看法。

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Can Money Buy Happiness?

Can money buy happiness?Some people firmly believe that money can buy happiness.It’s true that with enough money one can buy all the things he wants,and Iive a Iife of comfort and security.And it’s equally true that Iack of money might causes great troubles.

However,it‘s a common view that“money is the root of all evil.”The pursuit of money drivers many people to cheat and steal.In some areas,there’s nothing that can‘t be bought with money,resulting in many corruptions that make people miserable.

In my opinion,if we make honest and sensible use of money,it can be a stepping-stone to happiness.If we earn money Iawfully,we can be proud of our achievement.And we must also put our money to good use,so that it benefits not only ourselves but the whole society as well.Thus,my conclusion is that money can’t buy happiness,it make happiness possible.

(1995.1CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇提问类议论文。开篇的文章的开头利用题目来问答比较新颖,而且恰到好处。文中用黑体标出的句子是此文章的闪光点,为文章添加了生机。

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1.Various people have various answers.

2.But there are still a Iot of others who think that_________.

3.In my opinion,however,I can‘t agree with_________.

4.In addition,I think that_________.