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2.We must_________,if we wish to succeed.

3.We must always remember the old saying that_________.

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One of the most important things to succcss is_________.A great man is

always one who_________.One will never succeed all his Iife without_________.

As a rule,_________are accomplished by men of strong will.For example,_________.

On the one hand,_________.On the other hand,_________.We must_________,if we wish to succeed.We must always remember the old saying that_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Pride Goes Before a Fall.You should write at Ieast 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.很多人相信“骄兵必败”这一谚语。

2.为什么这么说。

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Pride Goes Before a Fall

Many people believe that the proverb“Pride goes before a fall”.The truth is deep and profound.I fully agree with it and its implication,in my mind,it can be justified in three respects.

First,if you are proud of your success,you may stop working hard and no Ionger make progress.In this case you will most probably fail the next time.Second,great men in history can always be modest,which,in my mind,is vital to their success.Third,Iooking at the matter from another perspective,we will find that our achievement is nothing to be proud of when compared to the fantastic dream in our heart-if we want to realize our Iife’s ultimate goal,we can never stop pursuing.

Living in an age when most people are hardworking,modesty seems more than necessary.As the modern competition becomes more and more fierce,we should realize the importance of modesty.If we can be modest all the time,we can make progress constantly,and Iife will be more meaningful.

妙语评析:这是一篇对此谚语表示赞同的文章。值得学习的作文模板。文中用黑体标出的句子是比较经典的句型,适于背诵。

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1.Many people believe that the proverb_________.

2.The truth is deep and profound.

3.Third,Iooking at the matter from another perspective,we will find that_________.

4.Living in an age when_________.

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Many people believe that the proverb_________.The truth is deep and profound._________.

First,_________.Second,_________.Third,Iooking at the matter from another perspective,we will find that_________.

Living in an age when_________.As_________,we should_________.

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Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:Student Use of Computers.You should write at Ieast 150words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.上图所示为某校大学生平均每周使用计算机的时间:1990年(2hours)、1995年(4hours)、2000年(20hours),请描述其变化;

2.请说明发生这些变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明);

3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。

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Student Use of Computer

According to the picture,it is clear that students tend to use computers more and more nowadays.The picture shows we can find that the average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week has increased sharply.In 1990,it was Iess than 2hours;and in 1995,it increased to almost 4hours;while in 2000,and the number soared to 20hours.

Obviously computers are becoming more and more popular.To begin with,computers facilitate us in more aspects of Iife.Moreover,the fast development of the Internet enlarges our demands for using computers.We can easily contact with friends in remote places through the Internet.As a result,the prices of computers are getting lower and lower,which enables more students to purchase them.

As to me,I think if we can use computer in the better way,it is good for us to use of them.But if in the reverse way,the consequence that we cannot imagined.And the most serious one is that many students are spending so much time playing PC games so that they ignore their studies.To conclude,it is urgent to Iet students to use computer in proper ways.

(2002.6CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇混合型图表类文章,既有解释原因又有说明后果。范文首段描述了1990年至2000年大学生使用计算机的变化情况。值得学习的作文模板。文中用黑体标出的句子是图表类写作常用句式。

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1.According to the picture,it is clear that__________.

2.To begin with,__________.

3.As a result,__________.

4.As to me,I think__________.

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According to the picture,it is clear that__________.The picture shows_________.

Obviously__________.To begin with,__________.Moreover,__________.As a result,__________.

As to me,I think__________.To conclude,__________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:What Jobs College Graduates Want to Do.You should write at Ieast 150words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.描述图表,简述目前大学毕业生的择业情况;

2.男、女同学就业选择的区别;

3.我的观点。

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What Jobs College Graduates Want to Do

It goes without saying that college students have a clear idea about their future occupation.Boys are to some extent different from girls in their choice as is seen from the graph.According to it,the most striking contrast is in the occupation of teaching:45%of girl students would Iike to become teachers after graduation whereas only 5%of boys want to do this job.What boys Iike to do most is to become managers and the second Iargest group is to be businessmen.Girls also Iike to pursue these two professions,with a percentage of 15%and 25%respectively.15%of boys want to become Iawyers while 10%of girls preferring this profession.

It can be easily proved that teaching is preferred by females as it provides a more regular and purer Iife.What is more,women‘s patience also fits the job well.Boys consider working as managers,businessmen and Iawyers more demanding and stimulating.It is true that more boys want to show their talents in these fields.One thing worthy of noting is that the number of girls wanting to do business is not small.This shows that girls also want to do challenging and exciting jobs.