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_________?It becomes a common tendency these days for people to ague this topic.Various people have various answers.Many people are opposed to that_________.They also argue that_________._________,as they think,is the_________.

But there are still a Iot of others who think that_________.In my opinion,however,I can’t agree with_________.At the same time,a Iot of people_________.In addition,I think that.

All in all,although_________is necessary for_________,it can‘t_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic Positive and Negative Aspects of Sport.You should write no Iess than 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.运动的积极因素。

2.运动的消极因素。

3.你的体会。

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The Positive and Negative Aspect of Sports

Everyone wants to be healthy.Doing some sports in our spare time has become much more popular.The benefits of participating in sports are numerous;it is especially beneficial for body and mind to those who seldom do any sports in their leisure time.

People today are too busy to exercise especially for the working people.We spend most of our time a work sitting in front of computers.This is harmful to our health,and more people have suffered from diseases as a result.To avoid diseases,we had better do more and more exercises.If we participate in sports,we will feel healthier because of increased flexibility and reduced redundant body fat.Sports are also can enrich our Iife and maintain our psychological health.Sports teach us about consideration,cooperation and optimism,and how to cope with difficulties.However,sports can do harm to those people who cannot balance their activities properly.If not done properly,sports can hurt their body,if overdone,exhaust their energy and even make them disabled.

In short,if done correctly,sports can result in numerous benefits,and it is not only gain a well-balanced life through sports for us,but also get more chances to move closer to nature.It will become an important part of our Iife.

(1992.12CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇利弊议论文。文章中心明确,结构清晰,语言完整,短小精悍。文中用黑体标出的句子表达了文章的中心思想,也是文章主题句。

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1.Everyone wants to be_________.

2.If not done properly,_________.

3.In short,if done correctly,_________.

4.It will become an important part of our Iife.

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Everyone wants to be_________._________has become much more popular.The benefits of_________are numerous;it is especially beneficial for_________.

People today are_________.To avoid_________,we had better_________.However,_________.If not done properly,_________.if overdone,_________.

In short,if done correctly,_________.It will become an important part of our Iife.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Failure a Bad Thing?You should write no Iess than 100words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.失败是常有的事;

2.人们对失败有各种不同的态度;

3.我对失败的态度。

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Is Failure a Bad Thing?

Failure is a common thing in our daily life.As a student,we sometimes fail to get high scores in our examinations.When we play games we can’t avoid being beaten by the others.And these failures happen naturally and almost everyone of us has such experience.

However there are different attitudes towards failure.Some people Iose heart in failure,they think the world is at its end.Some people don‘t take failure seriously,they just Iet it be,while some others Iearn much from failure and therefore see the Iight of hope through failure.

In my opinion,what really counts is not failure itself,but what we think of failure and do after failure.As Iong as we don’t give up and believe in ourselvesand in the meantime Iearn something from failure,we‘ll certainly make our marks in the end.So I’m never afraid of failure,for I believe that failure is not a bad thing,“failure is the mother of success.”

(1992.1CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇提问类议论文。按照提纲的要求分为了三段。第一段开门见山点出了主题,并举例说明失败是常有的事。第二段阐述了人们对失败有各种不同的态度。第三段表明了自己对待失败的态度。最后一句引用了一句谚语,为文章添加了生动性,给人留下了深刻的印象。文中用黑体标出的句子是比较经典的短句,如果运用到写作中会增色不少。

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1._________is a common thing in our daily Iife.

2.However there are different attitudes towards_________.

3.In my opinion,what really counts is not_________,but what we think of_________.

4.So I‘m never afraid of_________,for I believe that_________.

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_________is a common thing in our daily Iife._________.And these_________and almost everyone of us has such experience.

However there are different attitudes towards_________.Some people_________,they think_________.Some people_________,they just_________,while some others Iearn_________.

In my opinion,what really counts is not_________,but what we think of_________.As Iong as we don’t_________,we‘ll certainly_________in the end.So I’m never afraid of,for I believe that_________.

Direction:for this part,you are allowed 30miutes to write a composition about the“Studying Abroad or Studying Home”.You write at Ieast 120words and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.出国学习的热潮。

2.在本国学习的好处。

3.我的看法。

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Studying Abroad or Studying Home

Nowadays,with the development of science and technology,more and more people want to study abroad.There are students from colleges and universities,from the middle schools,from the primary schools,and people from all walks of Iife.What difference does it make between studying abroad and studying home?